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- Negativity is an issue that only ourselves can control and it is the perception of our mind on earthly things.
–Negativity can only be controlled if we develop the right perceptions over the issues which we encounter.
- The respect between us and the foreigners are now broken just because of this negative mindset.
–Negativity weakens the mutual sense of respect between Singaporeans and foreigners.
- This reflects the refusal of society to praise and commend upon the positive developments in society …
–This reflects how society refuses to [approve of] positive developments in society …
- Many foreigners have been staying in Singapore so that they could get a more attractive job than they had in their home country.
–Foreigners find it more advantageous to stay in Singapore because of better job prospects than in their home country.
- For example, Singaporeans can only go on demonstrations at a specific place and these demonstrations must be approved by the government.
–For example, Singaporeans are only allowed to demonstrate at Hong Lim Park after apply for a valid permit from the authorities.
- I agree with the author on this point. There are many examples in my society. For example, Jover Chew.
–The validity of the author’s claim is evidenced by the example of Jover Chew, a rouge electronic salesman who …
- Negative attitude can be easily transferred to other people. When people interact with one another.
–Negative attitudes are contagious as …
- However, it must be acknowledged that there are also presence of many positive attitudes towards issues in Singapore.
–However, it must be acknowledged that Singaporeans display positivity towards issues such as ….
- Being without a lawyer and not having sufficient funds to hire one, online netizens helped to collect money for helping him in arranging for a lawyer.
–Being without legal representation due to the lack of sufficient funds, Netizens have pooled their resources to support Roy’s activism.
- Albeit Singaporeans still have some unhappiness with certain problems …
–E.g. he was making progress, albeit slowly.
–Although Singaporeans …
- By behaving in a negative manner, individuals are able to better express their unhappiness.
–Negativity is a mechanism for individuals to display their unhappiness.
- It has manifested into a problem which is very hard to put out.
–It has manifested into a problem which is very hard to resolve
- Anti-foreigner sentiment in Singapore against the act of Ma Chi as he is a foreigner.
–The Ma Chi Ferrari crash incident has invoked a whirlwind of negative sentiments simply because he is a Chinese national.
- Should a person be unable to be compassionate to himself, it is not possible for him to know how to spread compassion …
–An uncompassionate individual will find it impossible to empathize with the unfortunate plight of others.
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